Examining teacher's evaluative language in written, audio and screencast feedback on EFL learners' writing from the appraisal framework: A linguistic perspective

被引:4
作者
Saeed, Murad Abdu [1 ]
AbuSa'aleek, Atef [2 ]
Alharbi, Mohammed Abdullah [2 ]
机构
[1] Univ Malaya, Fac Languages & Linguist, Dept English, Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia
[2] Majmaah Univ, Coll Educ, Dept English, Majmaah, Saudi Arabia
关键词
E; -feedback; Mode; EFL writing; Text revisions; Writing improvement; ELECTRONIC FEEDBACK; VIDEO FEEDBACK; STUDENT PERCEPTIONS; TEXT; ENGAGEMENT; CHOICES; MODES;
D O I
10.1016/j.asw.2024.100871
中图分类号
G40 [教育学];
学科分类号
040101 ; 120403 ;
摘要
Technology facilitates teacher corrective feedback on students' writing, but there is a need to examine how written, audio and screencast modes affect teacher's evaluative language of electronic (e-) feedback from linguistic approaches. By using the engagement resources of the appraisal framework within Systemic Functional Linguistics, this study examined the effect of written, audio and screencast modes on the instructor's evaluative language in his e-feedback on writing and the text revisions of 15 pairs of Saudi EFL learners. The linguistic analysis of the efeedback revealed that the instructor's engagement resources differed across the three e-feedback modes. Specifically, the screencast and audio e-feedback modes were dominated by expanding resources (resources expanding the space for dialogue) as opposed to the prevalence of contracting resources (resources limiting/shutting down the space for dialogue) in the written feedback mode. Moreover, the audio and screencast feedback modes contained more statements and suggestions whereas the written feedback mode was dominated by commands/orders and suggested corrections. The content analysis revealed that the screencast e-feedback mode addressed a higher number of global issues in writing; however, the audio and written e-feedback modes addressed a higher number of local issues in writing. Despite the higher overall rate of successful text revisions resulting from the screencast and audio e-feedback modes, no significant differences were found except in relation to students' global text revisions. The study offers useful pedagogical implications for instructors in effectively responding to students' writing.
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